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I'm tired of being here,
all locked up in my head.
Every day I hear a whisper,
and I'm closer to being dead.

Something taps me on the shoulder,
something I can't fight.
When it talks in that low voice,
my eyes are shut so tight.

Once it gets to a cetain point,
and I'm still sitting on the ground,
it tells me to do things,
I'm trying to ignore the sound.

Its voice is harsh and filled with confidence,
and I can hear a hint of sorrow.
Even when it's telling me,
I won't live to see tomorrow.

I don't know what to say,
and I don't know what to do.
I'm still hearing it now,
and I'm still suffering too.

I can't tell what its weakness is,
but I know I hear some lust.
I just have to get through this,
and have no one to trust.

06/27/2004
©2004-2009 ~A2sHaTo
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this is one I did today, and that picture I did yesterday, at a picnic. :D But, yeah, it's about..well..depression, lol, and I have no idea what happened to the side of the picture, it didn't used to be white..lol..
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Wow..I really love the picture, and the poem, and the two together..I used to feel this way...it's such a dark, sad way of life...great work.

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i change my mind so much i can't even trust it
my mind changed me so much i can't even trust myself
*nods* thank you!! I finally did start on photography, and am rather pleased with some of the turn outs. That's Daniel, my boyfriend, by the way! GO DANIEL GO! XD

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-My goal is to hurt you..Severely..Come here..-
Awesome poem, I totally understand what you're saying here. The rhyme scheme helps the flow a lot. :w00t:

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Heard ten thousand whispering and nobody listening. Heard one person starve, I heard many people laughing. Heard the song of a poet who died in the gutter.
Awesome poem, I totally understand what you're saying here. The rhyme scheme helps the flow a lot. :w00t:

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Heard ten thousand whispering and nobody listening. Heard one person starve, I heard many people laughing. Heard the song of a poet who died in the gutter.
How weird, it posted twice. Dang...
Well, I guess that means two times the compliments!

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Heard ten thousand whispering and nobody listening. Heard one person starve, I heard many people laughing. Heard the song of a poet who died in the gutter.
Ooh. I have no boyfriend. hehe

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i change my mind so much i can't even trust it
my mind changed me so much i can't even trust myself
the rhyme gives it a great flow, awesome job! heheh, i talked with daniel on yahoo IM the other night, Muahahaha!

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Peace, Love, and the Smell of Fresh Cut Grass
"You can't spell communism without MUN!" ~Kinnick High School MUN [Model United Nations]
It kind of sounds like you're dulling your edge by trying to rhyme. This might have been a better non-rhyming poem, but it still was pretty good
thankies :), oh, and by the way, I like your avatar, I had one like that once...It got destroyed XD, usually I can rhyme better than that but, lol, I kinda started sucking after awhile. XD

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-My goal is to hurt you..Severely..Come here..-

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